46,solok
kikik 1
Taman Inderawasih,
13600 Perai,
Pulau Pinang
19 January 2015
SHINJIRU MSC
SDN BHD,
No 19-2,
Wisma Laxton,
Jalan Desa,
Taman Desa Off KlangLama,
58100 Kuala
Lumpur,
WP Kuala
Lumpur.
Dear Sir/Madam ,
JOB APPLICATION
FOR COMPUTER TECHNICIAN
I am writing to apply for the post for the Computer
Technician , which was advertised on the job street .com at the internet when I
am trying to search a work.
My working experience at the Lucky Star Garment Manufactory
Limited improved my skills, communications skills and ability to work in a team
environment. I had 3 years experience in that company . I also works as a
computer technician in Toronto down town
area which enchaned my technical as well as customer service skills also.Moreover,
carrying out this work has improved my communications skills and my ability to
work in a team environment. I also have learned how to run a project from the
planning stage to its completion.
Computer Technician who can become accustomed and contribute
to your different IT projects. I hope you will consider my qualification and
credentials.Here is my resume that I attach it. I hope you will concidere it
and I will contact you next week to follow upmy application and possibility of
a personal interview.
Yours Faithfully,
qielala
SITI NURAQILAH BINTI ABDUL RAHMAN
Qila, please do not underline the subject line since you have written it in upper case and bold.
ReplyDeleteOpening - I am writing for the post of Computer Technician NOT for the post for the Computer Technician/. .....to search a job NOT a work.
Content - spelling error - enhanced NOT enchaned
Closing - spelling error - consider NOT concidere/ up my NOT upmy (put at space after 2 letters)
Overall, you did a good job Qila!
Tq madam .... . :)
Deletethe title no underline ..
ReplyDeleteokay pendek . i will :)
Deletewhy your title underline than you bold...it wrong...
ReplyDeletetq apek for you advise :)
DeleteAddress: "solok kikik" with a capital "S" and "K"
ReplyDeleteTitle: it should be "FOR THE POST OF A COMPUTER TECHNICIAN"
Content/Closure: Grammatical errors and sentence structure errors. example: "Here is my resume that I attach it", "considere" (consider).
Font: remember to use Arial 12
Alignment: Please Justify to make it neat.
Overall: Good job but be meticulous about spelling errors.
PS:
Please remove that annoying cursor...it's an obstruction.
tq for your comments. this cursor is for decorating my blogs .. so i think , nevermind. dont bother about this cursor .. :)
DeleteThe title should not be underline since you have written it in upper case
ReplyDeletetq fairuzzz for comments:)
Deleteno underline after bold u title
ReplyDeleteokay okay . tq for advise !!! appreciate ittttttttttttttt :P
DeleteDon't underline your topic because you have bold and capital latter your topic
ReplyDeleteokay my bad . tq :)
DeleteDo not underline the topic
ReplyDeleteokay bob thanks for your advise :P
Deletedon't underline your title
ReplyDeletemy bad :) tq megat
Deletethe name have to bold and the title doesn`t need to underline it
ReplyDeleteokay , thanks :)
Deletegood! just bold your name :)
ReplyDeletetq intan !!!:)
Deleteeverything is perfect but please bold your name...
ReplyDeleteperfect ?wow thanks for the comments . :)
DeleteBold your name okay , thumbs up ..
ReplyDeletesure. thanks president !
Deletetq guys :P :P ............................................ lalalalalalalalalaaaaaaaa
ReplyDeleteAssalamualaikum qielala..i see that your title must use bold if you dont underline it or you can use only underline the title but dont bold it..okay?? have a nice day with your bambam hahaha xP
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